I'm happy to help fiction writers who want to polish their work to publication readiness. Drawing from my experience in helping writers both singly and in workshops (I've studied at Capilano College, Simon Fraser University, the University of British Columbia, and the University of Waterloo), as well as through my professional work as an editor and creative writing teacher (I've taught at Simon Fraser University, the University of British Columbia, with the Vancouver School Board, and at The Learning Exchange in Vancouver's Downtown Eastside), I will give you an in-depth analysis of your story looking at overall structure, characterization, consistency of theme, plot, appropriateness to your intended audience, narrative arcs, use of dialogue, balance of narrative and scenic time, as well as suggestions on how to tighten your manuscript in preparation for submission to an agent or editor.
If this sounds like what you're looking for, e-mail me at
info@johnmavin.com, and we can talk about
what you have in mind.