Building a Plot
I'm in the middle of reading The Writer's Digest Handbook of
Novel Writing and I came across this article by Mary Kittredge called "Hot to Plot! A
Plotting 'System' That Works." Kittredge's ideas seem simple at one level, but on another they
seem bang on. For creating plots that work, she suggests the following system:
- Start with your idea
(her example is an attic that drips blood). - Create a character
(in Kittredge's case, an innocent housewife who's been recently widowed). - Give the character a need or want
(the police think she did it, so she wants to avoid suspicion). - Give the character a strong point
(an intense love of nature) - Give the character a fatal flaw
(fear of authority) - Now, put the character in a fairly stable situation and introduce the story problem
(hmm, a murder suspect with blood dripping from her ceiling--done) - Have the character try to solve the problem, but end up making things worse by exploiting the character's fatal flaw
(she's scared, so she calls a friend for help, but the police find out and arrive to investigate) - Repeat step seven as many times as needed
(the cops come to her house and ask to come in--she says yes[out of fear] and they find her husband's body in the attic) - Make things look just as truly awful as you can
(the cops are about to arrest her for the murder) - Develop an event that grows out ofthe character's strong point and shows the character her own fatal flaw
(she sees birds eating out of a feeder in her yard, but one of the cops scares them away by looking at them--she understands that the cop is not a real threat to the birds, but because they're scared, they won't eat, and if they won't eat, they'll die--hence, their fear will kill them--she then realizes that her fear is just like the birds) - Demonstrate the character's strong point to escape
(the body just happens to be in the only warm spot in the attic--everywhere else, the body would have frozen--she tells the cops why would she put the body in the only place that would get her caught?--the cops realize that someone else put the body there) - Wrap it Up
(say, the character says, wouldn't the friend who I called for help also gain financially from my husband's death--and since I called her and the police found it, maybe she's trying to frame me--she tells the cops, who aren't stupid and realize that this is the truth)
